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<title><![CDATA[明德新校赋]]></title>
<link>http://mdzx.cn/blog/u/66/archives/2008/9323.html</link>
<author>姚邦辉</author>
<pubDate>2008-12-26 16:11:00</pubDate>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #993300; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体">明德新校赋<SPAN lang=EN-US><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #993300; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #993300; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">百年明德，新承紫气；踔然清季，方兴未已。西园狭巷，岂缚鲲翼？乘势击浪，抟风南飞。遥望高岗，势如豹踞；乐而下之，是为新址。历时十月，佳构乃成；时人讶之，誉为奇迹。奇迹者，乃坚苦真诚而为也。唯坚苦可以胜天，唯真诚可以动人。回想南拓之际，为新校之奔走兮，何可胜数！拳拳赤子，寄情书简，曾部长建徽之首议也；昌华文教，著意庠序，周省长伯华之疾批也；眷眷衷肠，联名以呼，肖君<?xml:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" /><st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="纪美俞">纪美俞</st1:PersonName>君大光<st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="丁">丁</st1:PersonName>君<st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="夏畦刘">夏畦刘</st1:PersonName>君经南之上书也。洎下至市议，市委市府以为重，旋定豹子岭之新址。新址者，东临新府北延天心南望罔极西眺青枫红叶还想今朝人物也。自公元二零零七年十月兴土木起馆舍，至次年七月即入新校赋新篇矣。而时任明德俊贤，争与力焉。其间暴霜露，斩荆棘，舟车劳顿，辗转公门，无不殚精竭虑茹苦以为乐也。嗟夫！南拓已矣，奇迹长续。但见茶香溢室四海宾至者不绝，争赴湘滨树蕙滋兰者如缕，天下学子闻风竞骛者若云，何哉？盖新校创和谐扬特长也，冶儒雅倡书香也，为先为率为忍为磨也，崇明德而臻善树大木以振邦也。故于其间者，皆乐与担道求索矣。胜日登临，游目骋怀。见红砖融怡诗墙迤逦联廊隐没嘉树依依，对湖光潋滟书舍显敞香亭含雅靓带倚江，湖名屈子桥曰太白亭唤楚辞，莘莘青衿蹑湖畔芳草曲径广场皆置前贤先达像，闻芳径书语湘娥扬韵泰安虎啸朝弦暮歌，顿觉胸次开豁而起高步云衢之兴欤。于是乐而赋之。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #993300; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%; TEXT-ALIGN: right" align=right><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #993300; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">姚邦辉</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #993300; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #993300; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">公元二零零八年十二月撰于明德</SPAN></SPAN></P>]]></description>
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<title><![CDATA[学生原创诗词选批]]></title>
<link>http://mdzx.cn/blog/u/66/archives/2008/9322.html</link>
<author>姚邦辉</author>
<pubDate>2008-12-25 19:49:00</pubDate>
<description><![CDATA[<DIV class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt">学生原创诗词选批<SPAN lang=EN-US><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></B></DIV>
<DIV class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center>&nbsp;</DIV>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN class=style3><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">说明：双删除线处为出律，粗体斜字处未押韵，以下皆同，不重述。<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><B><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><o:p><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt">&nbsp;</SPAN></o:p></SPAN></B></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=style3><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">例：</SPAN></B></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">◎</SPAN></B></SPAN><B><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">满江红</SPAN></B><SPAN class=style3><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">残照长河，黄昏处、楚天依旧。胡公笑、潇湘磨血，新黉为寿。新馆斗酒迎紫气，青矜浩荡翻山斗。望北群、年少满江红，何须久？<SPAN lang=EN-US><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>星城客，朱颜瘦；夜郎事，笙箫奏。岂小情郁邑，挽初服袖。谁驾长风千里远，笑遗勋策万古后。家万里，村野远孤洲，君知否？<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=style3><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">批</SPAN></B></SPAN><SPAN class=style3><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">：<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><B><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">试改为：金满</SPAN></B><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt">长河，<B>高歌</B>处、楚天依旧。<B>历百载</B>、<B>黉宫</B>磨血，<B>湖湘同</B>寿。新馆斗酒迎紫气，青矜浩<B>气冲牛</B>斗。望北群、年少<B>显峥嵘</B>，何须久？</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><BR><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt">星城客，朱颜瘦；<B>周</B>郎事，<B>华年就</B>。岂<B>踌躇</B>郁邑，挽初服袖。谁<B>趁</B>长风千里远，笑<B>收</B>勋策<B>三秋</B>后。<B>有大鹏</B>、<B>展翅击沧溟</B>，君知否？<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN class=style3><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=style3><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">例：</SPAN></B></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">◎满江红</SPAN></B></SPAN><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">金满湘江，登高处、谁</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">与</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">相比？凌绝顶、气吞寰宇，风</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">发</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">意气。往昔华章</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">已消</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">逝，人生在世当</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">勉</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">励。扪心问，锦</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">囊三矢事</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">，应犹记。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">青云志，无舟<B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal">楫</I></B>；凌云梦，空</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">挂</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">起。当长风破浪，把沧</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">海</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">济。终</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">军</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">弃</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">缛</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">真</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">豪</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">迈，卧薪尝胆谁</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">与</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">敌</SPAN></I></B></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">。莫悲切，衣锦</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">还</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">乡</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">日</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">，</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">不远</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">矣。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">批：出律甚多。“登高处”“凌绝顶”意重。上片七字句乃出味处，最好对仗。“凌云梦，空挂起”，句间不能贯通。能以展望结句，然境界不是很高。细节处尚需打磨。初习填词，尤其长调，首先意思，其次谋篇，其次用韵，最后格律。本词亦很有可取：一是用典，李存勖、李白、终军等例随手拈来，且用得熨贴入扣，确要些读书功夫；二是气势一脉贯通，有揽辔御风之慨，叩问苍茫之志。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></P>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #800000"><SPAN style="COLOR: #800000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">金满湘江，登高处、谁相与媲？指江山、气吞寰宇，书生意气。往昔华章已消逝，人生在世当磨砺。扪心问，锦囊三矢事，应犹记。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #800000"><SPAN style="COLOR: #800000; FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #800000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">青云志，悬天际。凌云梦，高挂起。定长风破浪，把沧海济。终军弃缛真豪迈，勾践尝胆谁堪匹。待来日、挽袖弼乾坤，青天霁。</SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext style="COLOR: #800000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #800000; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN class=style3><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><o:p><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt">&nbsp;</SPAN></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=style3><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">例：</SPAN></B></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">◎</SPAN></B></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">满江红</SPAN></B></SPAN><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> / </SPAN></B><SPAN class=oblogtext0><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">暮秋怀三闾</SPAN></B></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">香草还生，望楚地，风啼雨咽。忽魂悸，寒</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">石</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">相与，鱼虾竞啮。空有满怀</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">报</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">国志，不</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">敌</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">脊后</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">佞</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">人<B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal">蔑</I></B>。无奈也、叹赏俊无人，</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">自</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">高洁。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">立江畔，</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">唤</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">英杰；伤三</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">闾</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">，情恒烈。念楚</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">国</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">诗</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">魂</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">，</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">丹</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">心</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">映</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">月。百里龙舟连</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">天</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">阙，万</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0 style="TEXT-DECORATION: line-through"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: underline; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">户</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">炊</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">烟</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">缭</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">粽</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">叶。谁人知，江底</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">蛾</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">眉心，犹</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">未</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">灭。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">批：出律多。然咏屈子，题材好，整体贯通一气，字里行间充溢抱不平的怨愤和对屈子高洁的赞美之情。起笔不俗，典型的比兴手法。“</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">寒</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">石</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">相与，鱼虾竞啮</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">”处不雅，让人生恶感。上对仗不工，下对仗排开格律意思不错。两结堪赏。两扇面对还待深度打磨。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN class=style3><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><o:p><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt">&nbsp;</SPAN></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=style3><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">例：</SPAN></B></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">◎</SPAN></B></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">蝶恋花</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">孤影霜风融月皎，戛戛秋蝉，飞窜轻轻敲。追问学</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">子</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">何所恼？双</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">膝</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">如木烟寒悄。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">徐步凭栏清馥绕，墙里蔷薇，是否夭中老？竖耳细听花泪召，乡魂悬挂</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; TEXT-DECORATION: line-through; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">月</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">眉<B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal">梢</I></B>。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">批：个别出律。虽是思乡旧题，但善于营造氛围。景物起笔，孤寂清冷，秋蝉凄切撩人，惹动乡绪。由于“</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">如木</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">”的铺垫，故起散心之举，揣想花事，</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">细听花泪，真易安情怀。末句把“乡魂”具象化，比太白“我寄愁心与明月”更有意思。不足处：“戛戛”音节难听，失美感，“竖耳”也显俗气。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=style3><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 21pt; mso-para-margin-left: 2.0gd"><SPAN class=style3><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><o:p><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt">&nbsp;</SPAN></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 21pt; mso-para-margin-left: 2.0gd"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=style3><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">例：</SPAN></B></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">◎</SPAN></B></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">采桑子</SPAN></B></SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext0><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> </SPAN></B></SPAN><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman">/ </SPAN></B><SPAN class=oblogtext0><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">思乡有感</SPAN></B></SPAN><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">残<SPAN style="TEXT-DECORATION: line-through">月</SPAN>不语离人苦，寒絮飘飘，木叶萧萧，泪眼凝望乡路迢。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">独<SPAN style="TEXT-DECORATION: line-through">自</SPAN>倚<SPAN style="TEXT-DECORATION: line-through">栏泪</SPAN>千<SPAN style="TEXT-DECORATION: line-through">行</SPAN>，绿落红凋，肠断魂销，孤雁哀鸣更寂寥。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">批：个别出律。四字句甚工，以景衬情，颇得其味。过片明显与上末“</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">泪眼凝望</SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">”意重，末句意在借</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">雁鸣</SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">造成回味，颇费心思。然整个下片宕不开，意境得不到扩展。可揣想下家乡。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 21pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-para-margin-left: 2.0gd; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=left><SPAN class=style3><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><o:p><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt">&nbsp;</SPAN></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 21pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-para-margin-left: 2.0gd; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=left><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=style3><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">例：</SPAN></B></SPAN><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">◎蝶恋花<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></B></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=left><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">独立苍穹凭汝济，冷月无情，却把游人碎。试看秋凉花渐累，当年花冢无从<B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal">觅</I></B>。<SPAN lang=EN-US><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>泪自无言鹃自<B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal">泣</I></B>，送梦湘西，可见音书未？颦蹙凝眸湘水逝，只今独<SPAN style="TEXT-DECORATION: line-through">留</SPAN>相思意。<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">批：</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">有</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">“</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">蝶恋花</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">”</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">味，第一个提交，赞。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">"</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">留</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">"</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">字出律，</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">“</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">觅</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">”“</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">泣</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">”</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">没压韵！起句欲成突兀之势，但</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">“</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">苍穹</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">”</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">是天空意，不好让人</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">“</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">独立</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">”</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">，可改为</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">“</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">苍茫</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">”</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">“</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">凭汝济</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">”</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">意不畅。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">“</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">冷月无情，却把游人碎</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">”</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">好听不好解。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">“</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">试看秋凉花渐累，当年花冢无从觅。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">”</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">不错，有黛玉怜花意。过片</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">"</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">无言</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">"</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">可改为</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">“</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">潸然</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">”</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">“</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">送梦</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">”</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">不好解，末能结在景上，足见用心，但</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">“</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">颦蹙凝眸</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">”</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">动作太密太实，应空灵一些。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 21pt; mso-para-margin-left: 2.0gd"><SPAN class=style3><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><o:p><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt">&nbsp;</SPAN></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 21pt; mso-para-margin-left: 2.0gd"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=style3><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">例：</SPAN></B></SPAN><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">◎蝶恋花<SPAN lang=EN-US> / </SPAN>叹段考失利<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></B></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">校内栋梁何众数？才子堆中、不悟无<SPAN style="TEXT-DECORATION: line-through">出</SPAN>路。驾驭良驹吁父母，学<SPAN style="TEXT-DECORATION: line-through">习</SPAN>辛苦惟余语。<SPAN lang=EN-US><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>遥想曾经何似虎？恰遇师时、灯下何其苦。奋笔疾书连不<B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal">驽</I></B>，只将金榜题名去。<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">批：个别出律。感受真实，词意大都贯通好解。“</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">众数”“吁父母”“连不驽”让人不知所云。末句境界落俗。最大的问题是缺少词味，表达太直露。宜用比兴法。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=left><SPAN class=style3><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><o:p><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt">&nbsp;</SPAN></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.1pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=left><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=style3><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">例：</SPAN></B></SPAN><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">◎蝶恋花<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></B></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=left><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">荆楚清寒寒浸月，木落飘飞，犹辩（似应作“辨”）当年雪？夜雨昆山情<SPAN style="TEXT-DECORATION: line-through">寻</SPAN>切，奈何相看青眉靥。<SPAN lang=EN-US><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>釜破舟沉成霸<B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal">业</I></B>，骓逝姬<SPAN style="TEXT-DECORATION: line-through">别</SPAN>，转眼西风烈。潮涨雁回今又没，空留重恨谁能灭。<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=left><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">批：个别出律。上咏己怀，下怀霸王。上景为寒冷凄清，情为伤离无奈，结合得甚好。只由“</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">荆楚</SPAN><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">”倏忽而至“昆山”，感觉跨度是否太大？两者应衔接下，不致突兀。下转而写霸王别姬，由离别而联，书惆怅怨恨之情，似叹事业未成之意。个人感觉下还是有些“飘”了，和上似难一体。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=left><SPAN class=style3><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><o:p><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt">&nbsp;</SPAN></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.1pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=left><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=style3><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">例：</SPAN></B></SPAN><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">◎阮郎归<SPAN lang=EN-US> / </SPAN>春<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></B></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=left><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">绿杨新柳绕湖生，风吹飞<SPAN style="TEXT-DECORATION: line-through">流</SPAN>莺。旧时归燕尾儿倾，枝摇揉碎琼。<SPAN lang=EN-US><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>微雨过，水盈盈。小荷初转青。野童伏岸待蜻蜓，偏头望纸筝。<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><SPAN class=oblogtext><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">批：律近乎完善。咏春之盎然生机和小童情趣。上景下人，布局好。景物妥当且极富层次。由杨柳而湖，此为静景；流莺翩飞，归雁弄枝，此为动景；最俏的是上末“</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">揉碎琼”，隐含雨意，再到过片，非常自然地由湖边过渡到写湖面。最后野童的出现使画面更富活力。然“待蜻蜓”，须聚精会神，再来句“偏头望纸筝”，甚为不谐，当改。</SPAN></SPAN></P>]]></description>
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<title><![CDATA[新史记 / 谭千秋传]]></title>
<link>http://mdzx.cn/blog/u/66/archives/2008/9321.html</link>
<author>姚邦辉</author>
<pubDate>2008-12-25 19:40:00</pubDate>
<description><![CDATA[<DIV class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体">新史记<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"> / </SPAN>谭千秋传</SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">文 / </SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">姚邦辉</SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000"><?xml:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" /><st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="谭"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">谭</SPAN></st1:PersonName><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">君千秋，湘南祁东人也。其父布衣，性忠厚，善待乡邻，育子女五，秋为长。秋诞时，与众无异，而意甚安。其父喜之，凝视良久，曰：“人生一世，草木一秋，望汝名垂千秋也。”因以名之。秋恬静从容，为人友善，事亲以孝悌之义。少家贫，每饭以苕豆，而让粟米与弟妹。尝有一友与人斗，呼秋助之，秋乃劝和。及入庠序，发愤忘食，为村上少年之冠。倘逢节假，昼则从父耕种陇亩之间，夜则拥书伏案青灯之下。久之，遂通五经。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">弱冠，适遇红朝重开科举。及试，名列榜上，乃负笈岳麓山下。四年，潜心书籍，砥砺研修，成绩殊异，校欲留焉。时蜀中东汽新建，亟需梁栋，于秋甚为中。秋曰：“国之需，吾之愿也。”于是婉拒母校，慷慨往赴蜀中。入蜀凡廿七载，磨血育人，桃李遍四海。传道授业，成效卓异，州府以为特。兼训导一职，虽疾言厉色，痛斥劣顽，然爱生殊甚。常自助贫困，给其衣食。即路见一石，必捡拾之，恐伤生焉。秋常问家乡事，架桥铺路，尽力捐输。虑及父病笃，躬侍不能，遂说弟妹，养赡之资，一肩担焉。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">戊子<st1:chsdate w:st="on" IsROCDate="False" IsLunarDate="True" Day="12" Month="5" Year="2008">四月初八</st1:chsdate>，蜀中大震，天下皆惊。时秋正倚讲坛，侃侃而论。初，稍晃。秋知有变，告生以逃。未毕，地大动。瞬息地啸凄厉，尘烟四起，沙石如雨。秋大呼：“疾走！疾走！但顾人，不顾物……”生皆鱼贯而出，径赴操场。秋立定，环视室内，户塌牖坏，尚余四生不得出。于是令其蜷伏桌底，张臂弓背翼蔽之，室继塌焉。明日，救出，臂犹张，遍伤。后脑抗楼板而凹，不忍视，而臂下四生皆无恙。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">秋妻张关蓉捧盒以还，及长，百的自发而送，两万学子秉烛以迎。临祈，家乡父老奔走数十里至县城相接。湖南安抚使闻之动容，挥笔题曰：“英雄不死，精神千秋！”</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">太史公曰：余观乎荧屏，视秋臂下之生，言及地动，犹露惶然之色，而秋大难之际，稳如磐石，指挥若定，至于以身护生，何其泰然！播大爱于无形，蕴伟大于平凡，振师道于将崩，千秋堪为师表矣。然地动前，何其默默，甚或有生怨之者。今以此名动天下，闻之令人歔欷。又闻范氏美忠，学源太学，而震至先奔，置生性命于不顾，尔后竟妄言惑众，辩诸博客，时人嗤之为“范跑跑”也。视之于秋，能无愧乎？</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="COLOR: #800000"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #800000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">( </SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #800000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">此文为本人原创，未经允许，严禁转载！<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #800000">)<o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></B></SPAN></P>
<P align=right><st1:chsdate w:st="on" IsROCDate="False" IsLunarDate="False" Day="22" Month="6" Year="2008"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">2008-6-22</SPAN></st1:chsdate></P>]]></description>
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<title><![CDATA[桐城当地的姚姓文学家族]]></title>
<link>http://mdzx.cn/blog/u/66/archives/2008/9320.html</link>
<author>姚邦辉</author>
<pubDate>2008-12-24 17:36:00</pubDate>
<description><![CDATA[<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">桐城当地的姚姓文学家族</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><o:p><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">&nbsp;</SPAN></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">桐城文派何以在桐城开宗成派，进而流衍全国，形成一个庞大的作家群体，居清一代文坛正宗，延续达二百馀年？本文试从地理因素研讨其成因。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>桐城，在祖国辽阔的版图上，只是一个区区弹丸之地；然而，其历史却相当悠久。桐城有史可稽，始于先秦的桐国。桐国偃姓，皋陶后裔。春秋时，桐国大体为楚附庸，又时或依附吴或越，后为<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">&nbsp;&nbsp;</SPAN>楚国所并。桐城县之得名，则自唐朝始。唐至德二载<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">(757)</SPAN>，改同安县为桐城县，治所即今桐城市。而原桐城县，约有今桐城、枞阳二县地。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">1949</SPAN>年，析桐城县东乡和南北乡相连地区置桐庐县，<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">1951&nbsp;&nbsp;</SPAN>年改桐庐为湖东，<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">1955</SPAN>年又更名枞阳。分枞阳以后，桐城县有原县域的西、北、南三部分。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>桐城的自然条件颇是优越。它背倚巍峨大别山，足濯浩淼长江水。由于地处大别山麓和长江<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">&nbsp;&nbsp;</SPAN>北岸之间，境内地形复杂，山地、丘陵、岗冲、平畈交错分布；河流纵横，湖<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">?</SPAN>白星罗。又气候温和，雨水充沛，四季分明，盛产桑麻鱼米，是江淮之间较为发达的经济大县。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>桐城人才辈出于明清两代的原因很多<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">(</SPAN>如历史之必然性，文学之继承性，学术思想之牵引，政治与社会方面的时代背景之影响<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">)</SPAN>，若就桐城本身的地理条件论，马其昶曾指出：<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">&nbsp; &nbsp; <BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>吾尝暇日陟考姥、投子之巅，望西北重峦巨岭隐然出云表，而湖水迤逦荡浦于其前，因念<?xml:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" /><st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="姚">姚</st1:PersonName>先生所称，黄、舒之间，山川奇杰之气蕴蓄且千年，宜其遏极而大昌。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">①</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">是则桐城之地，山水秀异，灵气所钟，足以毓贤，积累既久，卒萃贤达于一时，又桐城风俗，马其昶慨然书曰：<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>长老言吾乡俗乾嘉前至纯美矣：凡世族多列居县城中，荐绅告归皆徒行，无乘舆者；通衢曲巷，夜半诵书声不绝；士人出行于市皆冠服，客至亦然；遭长者于途必侧立，待长者过乃行；子弟群出必究其所往，不问其姓名谁何也；或非义，辄面呵之，即异姓子皆奉教惟谨。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">②</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">又清初进土、文华殿大学土、礼部尚书桐城张英<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">(1637?</SPAN>—<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">1708)</SPAN>论桐城之地理、风俗与文学尤详：<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>桐城山秀异，而平湖潆洄曲折，生斯地者，类多光明磊落之士。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">……</SPAN>端重严格，不近纷 华，不迩势利，虽历显仕，登津要，常歃然若韦素者，此桐城诸先正家学也。新进之士于众中觇其气度．多可而知其为桐人。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">……</SPAN>间尝窃叹寓内士大夫家，或一再传而止；吾里多阀阅，失后相望．或十数世，或数百年，蝉联不替，此皆由先达敦硕庞裕之气，有以致之，而享之老或未知也．吾闻先正训子弟读书法，以六经为根源，以诸史为津梁，以先秦两汉之文为堂奥<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">,</SPAN>以八家为门户；崇尚实学，周通博达，能不为制举业所缚束。涵濡既久，能振笔为古文词者，代有传人。朝堂之文，昌明剀直；性理之文，深醇奥衍；传记之文，条理详赡；酬答赋赠之文，温文尔雅，盖由先达之人往往安静恬裕，不汲汲于奔兢近取之途，不汶汶于声华糜丽之物，且幼而知所学习，故其为文皆有根据，不等于朝花而夕落也。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">③</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">由张英所论，可知明末清初桐城阀阅世家之敦行积学、文化氛围之浓重恬裕与夫传统教育之正宗尔雅。而这样的文化氛围与传统教育，造成的直接后果便是<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">“</SPAN>能振笔为古文词者，代有传人<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">”</SPAN>。仅以桐城姚氏姚范一族为例，便可见一斑。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">④</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">&nbsp; &nbsp; <BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">姚范，曾祖文然，明崇祯进土。清顺治三年任国史院庶吉士，转任各科给事中。康熙十五年任刑部尚书：以疏言敢谏、宽平刑律著称。家教甚严，<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">“</SPAN>后嗣弥盛，名贤相踵。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">”</SPAN>祖士基，文然第四子，名宦，以慈爱为治。范早孤，博涉多闻，尝与叶酉、刘大槐、方泽等约登楼共学，期十年不下，为举世不好之文。得方苞为文义法，其文沉邃幽古，绝去依傍，自成体势，务求精深，不事藻饰，力追古人而得其阃奥。又学问博洽，擅长考据，于经传子史无不综贯。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>范从子<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">(</SPAN>侄<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">)</SPAN>鼐，亲受文法于刘大槐、姚范，本所闻于家庭师友，间者益以自得，治之益精，所得实臻古人胜境，加以才藻纵横，遂显名天下，为一代宗主。其文高简深古，才敛于法，气蕴于味，尤近司马迁、韩愈。所选《古文辞类篡》七十四卷，为海内所传诵，是以言古文者益推桐城为正宗。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>范孙<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">?</SPAN>睽，家贫，客游为书记。诗、古文词、经学颇得范绪论，好有用之学，史事尤熟。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>范曾孙莹，少孤贫，有大略。尽发范遗书数百卷，遍读之；师事从祖鼐，受古文法。其诗与古文词洞达世务，激昂奋发，磊落自喜，论事之作尤能自出机杼。姚鼐弟子在乡里，以方东树、刘开、姚莹最著，因有<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">“</SPAN>小方、刘、姚<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">”</SPAN>之目。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>鼐子景衡，师事姚鼐、刘大<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">?</SPAN>弟子桐城方绩，刻苦力学，于诗文尤用意。所撰多至数百篇，悉有法度，才笔超轶，雄气过于其父。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>鼐从子宽，师事鼐，受古文法。后复师事景衡。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>鼐从子通意，师事鼐，从居钟山书院最久，得闻论诗文要旨，益深于诗，清隽不群。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>鼐族父兴泶，师事鼐最久，受古文法。于古文、经义、骈俪之文无所不解，为之皆有法度，而尤长于诗。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>鼐族孙柬之．师事鼐，受古文法，早闻绪论，以文学知名。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>鼐族孙允之．师事鼐。受诗、古文法，工诗、画及八分书。踵鼐之后，重修《姚氏族谱》。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>莹子浚昌。少孤：幼承庭训，又<st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="习闻其乡">习闻其乡</st1:PersonName>老师宿学讲论，慨然以古作者自期。古文词雅气渊，谨守家法，并以义法教授诸子：<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>浚昌子永楷。濡染家学，复师事桐城吴汝纶，受古文法，工诗，有冲澹之味。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>浚昌子永朴，师事武昌张裕钊及桐城吴汝纶、郑福照，受古文法。专力治经，其诗、古文亦古淡。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>浚昌子永概，师事桐城方宗诚、吴汝纶及武昌张裕钊，受古文法，从汝纶最久。论学于汉、宋无所偏，主治经，独好《诗经》：其文纡回蓄缩，务使词尽意不尽，以至词意俱不尽，此桐城文派家法，永概文允称嗣音。<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>以上姚氏由范而永楷、永朴、永概三兄弟，共十四人人《桐城文学渊源考》，凡历五世，代有人出，是为桐城当地的文学家族。这样的文学家族，父子兄弟伯<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">(</SPAN>叔<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">)</SPAN>侄转相传述，不断地成长与壮大。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">⑤</SPAN></SPAN></P>]]></description>
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<title><![CDATA[六国论（〔宋〕苏辙）]]></title>
<link>http://mdzx.cn/blog/u/66/archives/2008/9319.html</link>
<author>姚邦辉</author>
<pubDate>2008-12-24 17:28:00</pubDate>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">尝读六国世家，窃怪天下之诸侯以五倍之地，十倍之众，发愤西向，以攻山西千里之秦，而不免于灭亡。常为之深思远虑，以为必有可以自安之计。盖未尝不咎其当时之士，虑患之疏，而见利之浅，且不知天下之势也。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">夫秦之所与诸侯争天下者，不在齐、楚、燕、赵也，而在韩、魏之郊；诸侯之所与秦争天下者，不在齐、楚、燕、赵也，而在韩、魏之野。秦之有韩、魏，譬如人之有腹心之疾也。韩、魏塞秦之冲，而蔽山东之诸侯，故夫天下之所重者，莫如韩、魏也。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">昔者范雎用于秦而收韩，商鞅用于秦而收魏。昭王未得韩、魏之心，而出兵以攻齐之刚、寿，而范雎以为忧，然则秦之所忌者可见矣！秦之用兵于燕、赵，秦之危事也。越韩过魏，而攻人之国都，燕、赵拒之于前，而韩、魏乘之于后，此危道也。而秦之攻燕、赵，未尝有韩、魏之忧，则韩、魏之附秦故也。夫韩、魏，诸侯之障，而使秦人得出入于其间，此岂知天下之势耶？委区区之韩、魏，以当虎狼之秦，彼安得不折而入于秦哉？韩、魏折而入于秦，然后秦人得通其兵于东诸侯，而使天下遍受其祸。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">夫韩、魏不能独当秦，而天下之诸侯藉之以蔽其西，故莫如厚韩亲魏以摈秦，秦人不敢逾韩、魏以窥齐、楚、燕、赵之国，而齐、楚、燕、赵之国因得以自完于其间矣。以四方无事之国，佐当寇之韩、魏，使韩、魏无东顾之忧，而为天下出身以当秦兵；以二国委秦，而四国休息于内以阴助其急。若此可以应夫无穷，彼秦者将何为哉？不知出此而乃贪疆埸尺寸之利，背盟败约，以自相屠灭，秦兵未出，而天下诸侯已自困矣。至于秦人得伺其隙，以取其国，可不悲哉！</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">我曾经阅读《史记》的六国世家，私下里感到奇怪的是，天下的诸侯国凭借五倍于秦国的土地，十倍于秦国的民众，全力向西攻打殽山西面方圆千里的秦国，最后竟然不能免于灭亡。我常常对这个问题深思远虑，认为一定有可以使他们保全自己的策略。因此未尝不责怪当时六国那班谋臣，他们对于祸患的考虑太粗疏，谋求利益的眼光太短浅了，而且不能明察天下的形势啊！</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">秦王与诸侯争夺天下的地区，并不在齐、楚、燕、赵，而是在韩、魏的区域；诸侯与秦国争夺天下的地区，也不是在齐、楚、燕、赵，而是在韩、魏的区域。对秦国来说，韩、魏的存在就好比人有心腹之患。韩、魏两国阻塞着秦国的往来要冲，掩护着殽山以东的各诸侯国，所以天下最重要的地区，没有比得上韩、魏两国了。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">从前范雎在秦国受到重用时，就建议收抚韩国；商鞅在秦国受到重用时，又建议收抚魏国。秦昭王没有得到韩、魏的归顺，就出兵攻打齐国的刚、寿地区，范雎把这看作是值得担忧的事情。那末秦国所顾忌的是什么，就可以看得清楚了。秦国对燕、赵两国用兵，对它说来是危险的事。因为越过韩国、穿过魏国去进攻另一国的国都，前面将遇到燕、赵的抵抗，而韩、魏又会乘机从背后打来，这是危险的用兵之道。然而秦国进攻燕国、赵国时，不曾担心韩、魏会从后面袭击，这是因为韩、魏都已归附了秦国的缘故。韩国、魏国是各诸侯国的屏障，却让秦国军队能够往来其间，这难道是明瞭天下的形势吗？放弃小小的韩、魏，让它们去抵挡如狼似虎的秦国，它们怎能不屈服并投入秦国的怀抱呢？韩、魏两国既已屈服而归附了秦国，然后秦国的军队就能够无所阻挡地向东方各诸侯国用兵，从而使各国遍受它的祸害了。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">韩国和魏国不能独自抵挡秦国，然而天下的诸侯却又要凭借韩、魏来掩护自己不受西方的侵略，因此，不如加强和韩、魏的团结，从而抵制秦国。秦国军队不敢越过韩、魏来觊觎齐、楚、燕、赵四国，那末，齐、楚、燕、赵四国就能凭借这种形势使自己得以保全了。由四个没有战争的国家，来支持面对强敌的韩、魏，使韩、魏没有东顾之忧，而为天下的诸侯挺身而出，抵御秦兵。由韩、魏两国对付秦国，而另外四国在后方休养生息，并且暗中帮助解决韩、魏的急难。象这样就可以用来应付一切，那个秦国还能做什么呢？不知道出此策略，却贪图边界上的微小利益，背弃、破坏盟约，以至于自相残杀。秦国的大军尚未出动，而天下的诸侯已经把自己搞得困顿不堪了。致使秦人得以钻他们的空子，攻取他们的国家，能不令人悲痛吗？</SPAN></P></SPAN>]]></description>
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<title><![CDATA[少年中国说]]></title>
<link>http://mdzx.cn/blog/u/66/archives/2008/9318.html</link>
<author>姚邦辉</author>
<pubDate>2008-12-16 11:40:00</pubDate>
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<P style="LINE-HEIGHT: 180%; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="COLOR: #080808">文<SPAN lang=EN-US>/</SPAN>梁启超<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 180%; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="COLOR: #080808">日本人之称我中国也，一则曰老大帝国，再则曰老大帝国。是语也，盖袭译欧西人之言也。呜呼！我中国其果老大矣乎？梁启超曰：恶是何言，是何言，吾心目中有一少年中国在！<SPAN lang=EN-US> <o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 180%; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="COLOR: #080808">欲言国之老少，请先言人之老少。老年人常思既往，少年人常思将来。惟思既往也，故生留恋心；惟思将来也，故生希望心。惟留恋也，故保守；惟希望也，故进取。惟保守也，故永旧；惟进取也，故日新。惟思既往也，事事皆其所已经者，故惟知照例；惟思将来也，事事皆其所未经者，故常敢破格。老年人常多忧虑，少年人常好行乐。惟多忧也，故灰心；惟行乐也，故盛气。惟灰心也，故怯懦；惟盛气也，故豪壮。惟怯懦也，故苟且；惟豪壮也，故冒险。惟苟且也，故能灭世界；惟冒险也，故能造世界。老年人常厌事，少年人常喜事。惟厌事也，故常觉一切事无可为者；惟好事也，故常觉一切事无不可为者。老年人如夕照，少年人如朝阳；老年人如瘠牛，少年人如乳虎；老年人如僧，少年人如侠；老年人如字典，少年人如戏文；老年人如鸦片烟，少年人如泼兰地酒；老年人如别行星之陨石，少年人如大洋海之珊瑚岛；老年人如埃及沙漠之金字塔，少年人如西伯利亚之铁路；老年人如秋后之柳，少年人如春前之草；老年人如死海之潴为泽，少年人如长江之初发源。此老年与少年性格不同之大略也。梁启超曰：人固有之，国亦宜然。<SPAN lang=EN-US> <o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 180%; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="COLOR: #080808">梁启超曰：伤哉老大也。浔阳江头琵琶妇，当明月绕船，枫叶瑟瑟，衾寒于铁，似梦非梦之时，追想洛阳尘中春花秋月之佳趣。西宫南内，白发宫娥，一灯如穗，三五对坐，谈开元、天宝间遗事，谱霓裳羽衣曲。青门种瓜人，左对孺人，顾弄孺子，忆候门似海珠履杂遝之盛事。拿破仑之流于厄蔑，阿剌飞之幽于锡兰，与三两监守吏或过访之好事者，道当年短刀匹马，驰骋中原，席卷欧洲，血战海楼，一声叱咤，万国震恐之丰功伟烈，初而拍案，继而抚髀，终而揽镜。呜呼，面皴齿尽，白头盈把，颓然老矣！若是者，舍幽郁之外无心事，舍悲惨之外无天地，舍颓唐之外无日月，舍叹息之外无音声，舍待死之外无事业。美人豪杰且然，而况于寻常碌碌者耶！生平亲友，皆在墟墓，起居饮食，待命于人，今日且过，遑知他日，今年且过，遑恤明年。普天下灰心短气之事，未有甚于老大者。于此人也，而欲望以拏云之手段，回天之事功，挟山超海之意气，能乎不能？<SPAN lang=EN-US> <o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 180%"><SPAN style="COLOR: #080808">呜呼，我中国其果老大矣乎？立乎今日，以指畴昔，唐虞三代，若何之郅治；秦皇汉武，若何之雄杰；汉唐来之文学，若何之隆盛；康乾间之武功。若何之烜赫！历史家所铺叙，词章家所讴歌，何一非我国民少年时代良辰美景、赏心乐事之陈迹哉！而今颓然老矣，昨日割五城，明日割十城；处处雀鼠尽，夜夜鸡犬惊；十八省之土地财产，已为人怀中之肉；四百兆之父兄子弟，已为人注籍之奴。岂所谓老大嫁作商人妇者耶？呜呼！凭君莫话当年事，憔悴韶光不忍看。楚囚相对，岌岌顾影；人命危浅，朝不虑夕。国为待死之国，一国之民为待死之民，万事付之奈何，一切凭人作弄，亦何足怪！<SPAN lang=EN-US> <o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 180%"><SPAN style="COLOR: #080808">梁启超曰：我中国其果老大矣乎？是今日全地球之一大问题也。如其老大也，则是中国为过去之国，即地球上昔本有此国，而今渐渐灭，他日之命运殆将尽也。如其非老大也，则是中国为未来之国，即地球上昔未现此国，而今渐发达，他日之前程且方长也。欲断今日之中国为老大耶，为少年耶？则不可不先明“国”字之意义。夫国也者，何物也？有土地，有人民，以居于其土地之人民，而治其所居之土地之事，自制法律而自守之；有主权，有服从，人人皆主权者，人人皆服从者。夫如是，斯谓之完全成立之国。地球上之有完全成立之国也，自百年以来也。完全成立者，壮年之事也；未能完全成立而渐进于完全成立者，少年之事也。故吾得一言以断之曰：欧洲列邦在今日为壮年国，而我中国在今日为少年国。<SPAN lang=EN-US> <o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 180%; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="COLOR: #080808">夫古昔之中国者，虽有国之名，而未成国之形也，或为家族之国，或为酋长之国，或为诸侯封建之国，或为一王专制之国。虽种类不一，要之，其于国家之体质也，有其一部而缺其一部，正如婴儿自胚胎以迄成童，其身体之一二官支，先行长成，此外则全体虽粗具，然未能得其用也。故唐虞以前为胚胎时代，殷周之际为乳哺时代，由孔子而来至于今为童子时代，逐渐发达，而今乃始将入成童以上少年之界焉。其长成所以若是之迟者，则历代之民贼有窒其生机者也。譬犹童年多病，转类老态，或且疑其死期之将至焉，而不知皆由未完全、未成立也，非过去之谓，而未来之谓也。<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 180%; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="COLOR: #080808">且我中国畴昔，岂尝有国家哉？不过有朝廷耳。我黄帝子孙，聚族而居，立于此地球之上者既数千年，而问其国之为何名，则无有也。夫所谓唐、虞、夏、商、周、秦、汉、魏、晋、宋、齐、梁、陈、隋、唐、宋、元、明、清者，则皆朝名耳。朝也者，一家之私产也；国也者，人民之公产也。朝有朝之老少，国有国之老少，朝与国既异物，则不能以朝之老少而指为国之老少明矣。文、武、成、康，周朝之少年时代也。幽、厉、桓、赧，则其老年时代也；高、文、景、武，汉朝之少年时代也，元、平、桓、灵，则其老年时代也。自余历朝，莫不有之。凡此者，谓为一朝廷之老也则可，谓为一国之老也则不可。一朝廷之老且死，犹一人之老且死也，于吾所谓中国者何与焉？然则吾中国者，前此尚未出现于世界，而今乃始萌芽云尔。天地大矣，前途辽矣，美哉，我少年中国乎！<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 180%; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="COLOR: #080808">玛志尼者，意大利三杰之魁也，以国事被罪，逃窜异邦，乃创立一会，名曰“少年意大利”。举国志士，云涌雾集以应之，卒乃光复旧物，使意大利为欧洲之一雄邦。夫意大利者，欧洲第一之老大国也，自罗马亡后，土地隶于教皇，政权归于奥国，殆所谓老而濒于死者矣。而得一玛志尼，且能举全国而少年之，况我中国之实为少年时代者耶？堂堂四百余州之国土，凛凛四百余兆之国民，岂遂无一玛志尼其人者！<SPAN lang=EN-US> <o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 180%; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="COLOR: #080808">龚自珍氏之集有诗一章，题曰《能令公少年行》。吾尝爱读之，而有味乎其用意之所存。我国民而自谓其国之老大也，斯果老大矣；我国民而自知其国之少年也，斯乃少年矣。西谚有之曰：有三岁之翁，有百岁之童。然则国之老少，又无定形，而实随国民之心力以为消长者也。吾见乎玛志尼之能令国少年也，吾又见乎我国之官吏士民能令国老大也，吾为此惧。夫以如此壮丽浓郁、翩翩绝世之少年中国，而使欧西、日本人谓我为老大者何也？则以握国权者皆老朽之人也。非哦几十年八股，非写几十年白折，非当几十年差，非捱几十年俸，非递几十年手本，非唱几十年诺，非磕几十年头，非请几十年安，则必不能得一官，进一职。其内任卿贰以上、外任监司以上者，百人之中，其五官不备者，殆九十六七人也，非眼盲，则耳聋，非手颤，则足跛，否则半身不遂也。彼其一身饮食、步履、视听、言语，尚且不能自了，须三四人在左右扶之捉之，乃能度日，于此而乃欲责之以国事，是何异立无数木偶而使之治天下也。且彼辈者，自其少壮之时，既已不知亚细、欧罗为何处地方，汉祖、唐宗是那朝皇帝，犹嫌其顽钝腐败之未臻其极，又必搓磨之、陶冶之，待其脑髓已涸，血管已塞，气息奄奄，与鬼为邻之时，然后将我二万里山河，四万万人命，一举而畀于其手。呜呼！老大帝国，诚哉其老大也！而彼辈者，积其数十年之八股、白折、当差、捱俸、手本、唱诺、磕头、请安，千辛万苦，千苦万辛，乃始得此红顶花翎之服色，中堂大人之名号，乃出其全副精神，竭其毕生力量，以保持之。如彼乞儿，拾金一锭，虽轰雷盘旋其顶上，而两手犹紧抱其荷包，他事非所顾也，非所知也，非所闻也。于此而告之以亡国也，瓜分也，彼乌从而听之？乌从而信之？即使果亡矣，果分矣，而吾今年既七十矣八十矣，但求其一两年内，洋人不来，强盗不起，我已快活过了一世矣。若不得已，则割三头两省之土地奉申贺敬，以换我几个衙门；卖三几百万之人民作仆为奴，以赎我一条老命，有何不可？有何难办？呜呼，今之所谓老后、老臣、老将、老吏者，其修身、齐家、治国、平天下之手段，皆具于是矣。西风一夜催人老，凋尽朱颜白尽头。使走无常当医生，携催命符以祝寿。嗟乎痛哉！以此为国，是安得不老且死，且吾恐其未及岁而殇也。<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 180%"><SPAN style="COLOR: #080808">梁启超曰：造成今日之老大中国者，则中国老朽之冤业也；制出将来之少年中国者，则中国少年之责任也。彼老朽者何足道，彼与此世界作别之日不远矣，而我少年乃新来而与世界为缘。如僦屋者然，彼明日将迁居他方，而我今日始入此室处，将迁居者，不爱护其窗栊，不洁治其庭庑，俗人恒情，亦何足怪。若我少年者前程浩浩，后顾茫茫，中国而为牛、为马、为奴、为隶，则烹脔鞭箠之惨酷，惟我少年当之；中国如称霸宇内、主盟地球，则指挥顾盼之尊荣，惟我少年享之。于彼气息奄奄、与鬼为邻者何与焉？彼而漠然置之，犹可言也；我而漠然置之，不可言也。使举国之少年而果为少年也，则吾中国为未来之国，其进步未可量也；使举国之少年而亦为老大也，则吾中国为过去之国，其澌亡可翘足而待也。故今日之责任，不在他人，而全在我少年。少年智则国智，少年富则国富，少年强则国强，少年独立则国独立，少年自由则国自由，少年进步则国进步，少年胜于欧洲，则国胜于欧洲，少年雄于地球，则国雄于地球。红日初升，其道大光；河出伏流，一泻汪洋；潜龙腾渊，鳞爪飞扬；乳虎啸谷，百兽震惶；鹰隼试翼，风尘吸张；奇花初胎，矞矞皇皇；干将发硎，有作其芒；天戴其苍，地履其黄；纵有千古，横有八荒；前途似海，来日方长。美哉，我少年中国，与天不老！壮哉，我中国少年，与国无疆！<SPAN lang=EN-US> <o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 180%"><SPAN style="COLOR: #080808">“三十功名尘与土，八千里路云和月。莫等闲白了少年头，空悲切！”此岳武穆《满江红》词句也，作者自六岁时即口受记忆，至今喜诵之不衰。自今以往，弃“哀时客”之名，更自名曰“少年中国之少年”。<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
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<title><![CDATA[[转]读《过小孤山大孤山》札记]]></title>
<link>http://mdzx.cn/blog/u/66/archives/2008/9317.html</link>
<author>姚邦辉</author>
<pubDate>2008-12-13 21:06:00</pubDate>
<description><![CDATA[<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">读《过小孤山大孤山》札记</SPAN></P>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">一、烽火矶的战略位置</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">陆游在《过小孤山大孤山》中提到的烽火矶，位于江西马当山附近。这是一座不引人注目的小石矶，（《中国古今地名大词典》、《中国名胜词典》、《辞海》均不载其条目）而陆游却花了不少笔墨描绘它，这主要是陆游十分重视它的战略地位。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">陆游离乡入蜀，志在雪国耻，复中原。清人钱曾在《读书敏求记》中说陆游《入蜀记》“凡途中山川易险，无不排日记录”。由此可见他在一路跋涉之中饱览长江名胜风景的同时，还用战略眼光对长江沿岸的地形地貌进行了考察。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">“长江浩荡，敌之巨防”，由于长江天堑的阻隔，历史上曾出现过魏蜀吴三国鼎立、十六国和东晋的分裂，以及南北朝对峙的局面。因此长江沿岸留有不少历代战争的遗迹。在这些历代战争遗迹中，尤其是以峭壁临江的石矶最为突出。它们峭拔峥嵘，兀立于江边，不仅风景秀丽，而且地势险要，往往是古代的重要渡口或通道，成为兵家必争之地。陆游在《入蜀记》中共记载了十九个知名的石矶，其中有的在历史上就曾发生过重大战役，诸如采石矶、赤壁矶等。陆游对这些历代战争遗迹的考察有着十分重要的现实意义。宋南渡后，金统治者一直未收敛他们南侵的野心，因而长江又成为南宋的重要防线，一些历史上的战略要地又都驻扎上南宋的军队。烽火矶是以南朝在此设立烽火台而得名，“南朝自武昌至京口，列置烽燧，此山当是其一也。”到了南宋，这些古代烽火台依然沿用。《续资治通鉴》载：宋高宗绍兴二年，“初命沿江置烽火台以为斥堠”。南宋人周煇《清波杂志》也记载：“沿江置烽火台，每日平安，即于发更时举火一把；每夜平安，即于次日平明举烟一把；缓急盗贼不拘时候，日则举烟，夜则举火各三把。绍兴初，江东安抚使李光所请。”再根据陆游文章中所介绍的距离烽火矶不远的小孤山驻有“戎兵”的情况来看，这座古代烽火台在当时是不会废圮的，由此可知陆游为什么要对烽火矶细加描绘。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">陆游在描绘烽火矶的过程中，先是自舟中远望，所见烽火矶自然是一个依稀的轮廓</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman">----</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">“突兀而已”，待到“抛江过其下”，移远就近，看到的却是另一番景象：“嵌岩窦穴，怪奇万状，色泽莹润，亦与它石迥异。”这还不够，作者又用特写的手法，描绘一块“杰然特起”的巨石，红色的枝藤和绿色的野蔓，萦绕在它身上，犹如宝石镶嵌的屏风，光彩夺目。作者对这块巨石大加渲染，显然是有用意的，他是以这块巨石来象征那抗金御敌的战士，在沿江烽火台上筑起一道“宝装”屏障。这段描写正是文章的融情入景之处。</SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">二、“<st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="安济">安济</st1:PersonName>夫人”的传说与“小姑庙”的兴衰</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">小孤山祠宇又称启秀寺，相传始建于唐。寺内原供奉关羽像，后因“世俗转孤为‘姑’”，寺内便供起传说中的“小姑”像，</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman">[1]</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">南唐时，曾有人指出这是“穿凿浮伪”，建议“去妇人位，立山神庙貌”。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman">[2]</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">但到了北宋时“又复妇人像，而敕额以圣母为称”。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman">[3]</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">陆游入蜀途径这里时，见到的神像已被封为“<st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="安济">安济</st1:PersonName>夫人”。</SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">“<st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="安济">安济</st1:PersonName>夫人”究竟是一位什么样的神祗？南宋吴曾《能改斋漫录》卷十八载有题为《<st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="安济">安济</st1:PersonName>夫人庙》的一段文字，兹录于此：</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">本朝开宝中，真州有渔者，钓一木刻妇人，背刻“丁氏“二字。既归，神事之，辄有灵验。立庙江上，舟过其下者，必祠而后济。州为保奏，<st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="封安济">封安济</st1:PersonName>夫人。庙在长芦崇福禅院之西。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="安济"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">安济</SPAN></st1:PersonName><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">夫人本姓“丁”，原是传说中掌管长江航道的女神。“小姑”之所以也被称为“<st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="安济">安济</st1:PersonName>夫人”，是因为小孤山下水流湍急如沸，有“虽无风，亦浪涌”的说法。每当风雨季节，行船十分危险。行旅舟过其下，都要到庙内进香，求助“小姑”保佑其安全行驶。北宋孙光宪《北梦琐言》卷十二就曾记载：“后人语讹，作姑姊之‘姑’，创祠山上，塑像艳丽。而风涛甚恶，行旅惮之，每岁本府命从事躬祭。”</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman">[4]</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">北宋诗人陈简夫也留有“山称孤独字，庙塐女郎形。过客虽知误，行人但乞灵”的诗句。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman">[5]</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">久而久之，人们便把“小姑”称为“<st1:PersonName w:st="on" ProductID="安济">安济</st1:PersonName>夫人”。</SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">到了南宋，小孤山祠宇的香火应当是更加旺盛，这可以从陆游的文章中的知，他交代了绍兴初年，抗金名将张浚“自湖湘还”，对小孤山祠宇“尝加营葺”。这件事一方面表明了爱国将领对祖国名胜古迹的珍惜，另一方面也反映了长江沿岸人民（甚至包括南宋军队）在金兵的时时侵扰下，更是把命运寄托在神灵身上。陆游入蜀，还写有《晚泊》、《初寒》等诗，其中就有“丛祠无处不祈风”、“江边丛祠常掩扉”的句子，可见沿江设有不少类似“小姑庙”的祠宇，这种想象反映了当时的社会状况。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">但这时陆游所见到的“小姑庙”已“极于荒残”，和“丹翠凌云起”的小孤山风光很不协调。对此，陆游甚感痛惜。祠宇荒残之状反映了大宋江山的破碎之貌。南宋统治者只求偏安一隅，哪顾得上对这些残破的祠宇整饰修理。陆游由此追忆起张浚营葺小孤山庙的往事。追忆的文字虽然寥寥数语，却寄托着他的无限感慨。宋孝宗隆兴初年，陆游曾参加张浚主持的北伐工作，和张浚结为知己。后因战事失利，陆游被投降派加上一个“交结台谏，鼓唱是非，力说张浚用兵”的罪名，“免归”故乡山阴。张浚辅佐南宋高宗、孝宗两朝四十载，竭忠尽智，力主抗金，曾被封为魏国公。但连遭奸臣秦桧、汤思退之流的陷害，困于谗忌，屡起屡谪。先后谪永州、连州、福州。隆兴北伐后，竟死于判福州的路上。张浚死时，陆游曾写下一首诗：</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 0.1pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">河亭挚手共徘徊，万事宁非有数哉。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">黄阁相君三黜去，青云学士一麾来。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">中原故老知谁在，南岳新丘共此哀。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 0.1pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">火冷夜窗听急雪，相思时取近书开。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">陆游既钦佩张浚的忠贞为国，也深深的同情他坎坷的遭遇。如今，陆游来到了小孤山，见故人“尝加营葺”的寺宇已“极为荒残”，只留下空载其事的石碑，怎能不触景生晴，感慨万分呢！</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">陆游入属前，曾写有《通判夔州谢政府启》，文中写道：</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">念昔并游于英俊，颇尝抒思于文辞，既嗟气力之甚卑，复恨见闻之不广。今将穷江湖万里之险，历吴楚旧都之雄。山颠水涯，极诡异之观；废宫故墟，吊兴废之迹。动心忍性，庶几或进于毫分；娱优抒悲，亦当勉见于言语。倘粗传于后世，犹少答于深知。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman">[7]</SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">由此可见，“吊兴废之迹”乃陆游写《入蜀记》的一个动因。我们从他记叙小孤山衰败的情况中，不是正可以看出他对大宋江山“动心忍性”、“娱忧抒悲”的爱国情感吗？</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">三、不异丹青图画</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">明人何宇度在《益部谈丛》中曾评价陆游《入蜀记》“不异丹青图画”，阅读《过小孤山大孤山》，确实犹如欣赏一幅清丽隽美的山水画卷。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">作者是按照自己的游踪，运用逐景推移的手法，由水及山，连山带水，一景一景地窥探幽姿。他先是从峭壁临江的烽火矶着墨，然后写隔江相望的小孤山和澎浪矶，再写横扼湖口的大孤山。所写的这主要四处景物中，烽火、澎浪二矶同一类型，但在作者笔下，却各显特色：烽火矶因山石险峻，南朝在此设立烽火台而得名，所以作者着意写其石，所谓“嵌岩窦穴，怪奇万状，色泽莹润，亦于它石迥异”，写得有形有色；澎浪矶因水流十分迅猛，疾湍如沸而得名，所以作者着意写其水，所谓“三面临江，倒影水中，亦占一山之胜”、“舟过矶，虽无风，亦浪涌”，写得是有影有声。大小孤山也是同类型的景物，但在作者笔下，也各呈异彩：因小孤山近旁有“沙洲葭苇”，所以作者着意写其山貌，描绘出小孤山的“碧峰巉然孤起，上干云霄”的峭丽之姿；因大孤山四周“渺弥皆大江”，所以作者着意写其水势，表现出大孤山“四面峭插水”，“望之如浮水面”的壮观之态</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman">,</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">以及“开帆入天镜”，水流“合处如引绳，不相乱”的奇景。作者通过对同类景物进行不同特色的描绘，创造出一个两山相对，两矶相依，山水相得，刚柔相济的艺术境地，构成了一幅景物层层远去而又浑然一体的画面。</SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">对于大小孤山一带的美景，作者是通篇从一“望”字生发出来的。他时而自舟中远眺，时而在山下仰视，时而登高俯视，从多种角度捕捉景物的特色。譬如写小孤山，作者先是运用“远观取其势”</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman">[8]</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">的形体透视，“自数十里外望之，碧峰巉然孤起，上干云霄”，把小孤山拔江而起的势态表现的淋漓尽致。接着是移步换形的空间透视，对小孤山产生“逾近逾秀”的感受。这是空间距离的变化对景物色彩的晦明所起的作用。作者把形体透视和空间透视结合起来，所见到的景物形体和色彩随着距离的移动产生了无穷的变幻。他也由此时之景迁想到它日之姿，生发出小孤山在“冬夏晴雨”中“姿态万变”的景外之趣，画外之情。然后作者又近观仰望，小孤山呈现出更为清晰的状态，连山上祠宇荒残程度也能分辨得出。他又把视线由小孤山祠宇引向澎浪矶别祠，俯视它在水中的倒影，化实景为虚景。傍晚时分，陆游又冒着微雨登临小孤山，视野更加开阔。“南望彭泽、都昌诸山，烟雨空濛，鸥鹭灭没”，他通过登高远眺，把数十里之外的迷蒙隐约的景物组织到小孤山地域中来，扩大了小孤山景物的空间。随后他又俯视山下“俊鹘抟水禽，掠江东南去”的奇景，静中有动，平添活力，丰富画面的内容。陆游观赏景物的方法，颇象我国绘画理论中的“散点透视”。所谓“散点透视”，是指画家在描绘自然景物时通过视角或前或后、或左或右、或上或下地不断移动，把同一空间不能尽收眼底的景物集中到同一画面。散点透视不同于西方画论中的“焦点透视”，焦点透视只有一个固定的观察点，所反映的景物只有一面，而散点透视却打破了焦点透视的局限，能反映景物的多面，或全貌。这在我国传统山水画里表现的最为突出。陆游虽然不是画家，但他欣赏景物的方法却很符合这种“散点透视”，从而他在文章中描绘出大小孤山一带的高远、深远、平远之景，</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman">[9]</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">表现了长江山水的深度和广度，以及它富有变化的节律，收到了和我国古代山水画同样的艺术效果。</SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">在我国绘画史上，确有人以大小孤山作为绘画的题材。唐代著名山水画家李思训的《长江绝岛图》就描绘出大小孤山“峨峨两烟鬟，晓镜开新妆”的景色。此画流传到宋代，大文学家苏轼看了似闻“棹歌中流声抑扬”，随即写了一首题画诗。陆游在《过小孤山大孤山》中引用的“舟中贾客莫漫狂，小姑前年嫁彭郎”的诗句，就出自苏轼的题画诗。有趣的是，陆游也曾看到一幅《小孤山图》，并也题了一首诗，诗曰：</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">江平风不生，镜面渺千里。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">轲峨万斛舟，远望一点耳。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">大孤江中央，四面峭插水。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">小孤特奇丽，丹翠凌云起。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">重楼邃殿神之家，帐中美人灿如花。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">游人徒倚阑干处，俊鹘横江东北去。</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">我们不妨将陆游的诗文相对照，两者写景状物相同，有相互渗透的微妙处，却章法各异。诗是依据《小孤山图》顺流而下来描绘景物，文章却是按照自己的游踪，逆江而上去描绘景物。两相比较各尽其妙。《小孤山图》已失传，它是一个什么样的幅式已不得而知。从陆游的题画诗看，它象是一幅立轴，而陆游的文章《读小孤山大孤山》却犹如一幅徐徐舒展开来的长卷。</SPAN></SPAN></P>]]></description>
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<title><![CDATA[《大学》全文及注解2]]></title>
<link>http://mdzx.cn/blog/u/66/archives/2008/9316.html</link>
<author>姚邦辉</author>
<pubDate>2008-12-13 16:08:00</pubDate>
<description><![CDATA[<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体,Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt">修身先正心</SPAN></B><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体,Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体,Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes"></SPAN><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体,Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">【原文】 </SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">所谓修身在正其心者，身有所忿懥（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">1</SPAN>），则不得其正；有所恐惧，则不得其正；有所好乐，则不得其正；有所忧患，则不得其正。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">心不在焉，视而不见，听而不闻，食而不知其味。此谓修身在正其心。（传<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">7</SPAN>）</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">【注释】 </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">　　①身：程颐认为应为“心”。忿懥（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">zhl</SPAN>）：愤怒。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">【译文】 </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">　　之所以说修养自身的品性要先端正自己的心思，是因为心有愤怒就不能够端正；心有恐惧就不能够端正；心有喜好就不能够端正；心有忧虑就不能够端正。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　心思不端正就像心不在自己身上一样：虽然在看，但却像没有看见一样；虽然在听，但却像没有听见一样；虽然在吃东西，但却一点也不知道是什么滋味。所以说，要修养自身的品性必须要先端正自己的心思。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">【读解】 </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">　　正心是诚意之后的进修阶梯。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　诚意是意念真诚，不自欺欺人。但是，仅仅有诚意还不行。因为，诚意可能被喜怒哀乐惧等情感支配役使，使你成为感情的奴隶而失去控制。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　所以，在“诚其意”之后，还必须要“正其心”，也就是要以端正的心思（理智）来驾驭感情，进行调节，以保持中正平和的心态，集中精神修养品性。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　这里需要注意的是，埋与情，正心和诚意不是绝对对立，互不相容的。朱嘉说：喜怒哀乐惧等都是人心所不可缺少的，但是，一旦我们不能自察，任其左右自己的行动，便会使心思失去端正。所以，正心不是要完全摒弃喜怒哀乐俱等情欲，不是绝对禁欲，而只是说要让理智来克制、驾驭情欲，使心思不被情欲所左右，从而做到情理和谐地修身养性。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　也就是说，修身在正其心不外乎是要心思端正，不要三心二意，不要为情所牵，“心不在焉，视而不见，听而不闻，食而不知 其味”。（这凡句后来成了成语和名言，用来生动地描绘那种心神不属，思想不集中的状态，是教书先生在课堂上批评学生的常用语言。）</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">这样来理解，修身在正其心也就没有什么神秘感了罢。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><BR></SPAN><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">齐家先修身<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></B></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体,Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes"></SPAN><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体,Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">【原文】 </SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">所谓齐其家在修其身者，人之其所亲爱而辟焉①，之其所贱恶 而辟焉，之其所畏敬而辟焉，之其所哀矜②而辟焉，之其所敖情③ 而辟焉。故好而知其恶，恶而知其美者，天下鲜矣！故谚有之曰：“人莫知其子之恶，莫知其苗之硕④。”此谓身不修不可以齐其家。（传<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">8</SPAN>）</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">【注释】 </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">　　①之：即“于”，对于。辟：偏颇，偏向。②哀矜：同情，怜悯。③敖，骄做。惰：怠慢。④硕：大，肥壮。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">【译文】 </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">之所以说管理好家庭和家族要先修养自身，是因为人们对于自己亲爱的人会有偏爱；对于自己厌恶的人会有偏恨；对于自己敬畏的人会有偏向；对于自己同情的人会有偏心；对于自己轻视的人会有偏见。因此，很少有人能喜爱某人又看到那人的缺点，厌恶某人又看到那人的优点。所以有谚语说：“人都不知道自己孩子的坏，人都不满足自己庄稼的好。”这就是不修养自身就不能管理好家庭和家族的道理。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">【读解】 </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">　　在这里，修养自身的关键是克服感情上的偏私：正己，然后正人。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　儒学的进修阶梯由年向外展开，这里是中间过渡的一环。在此之前的格物。致知、诚意、正心都在个体自身进行，在此之后的齐家、治国、平天下开始处理人与人之间的关系，从家庭走向社会，从独善其身转向兼善天下。当然，其程序仍然是由内逐步外推：首先是与自身密切相关的家庭和家族，然后才依次是国家。天下。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　正因为首先是与自身密切相关的家（家庭和家族），所以才有一个首当其冲的克服感情偏私的问题。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　中国人常说：“家和万事兴。”</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　美国人说，“家是父亲的王国，母亲的世界，儿童的乐园。”</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　德国人说：“人无国王、庶民之分，只要家有和平，便是最幸 福的人。”</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　法国人说得更好：“对于亚当而言，天堂是他的家；然而对于亚当的后裔而言，家是他们的天堂。”（伏尔泰语）</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　家是永恒的话题。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　但是，如果你不排除偏私之见，修身正己以正人，你就不能管理好这个你所拥有的天堂和乐园，就会像有人所告诫的那样：“坏家庭无法养育我们纯洁的灵魂，倒有可能成为我们自掘的墓场。”</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　天堂不就变成地狱了吗？</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"> <BR style="mso-special-character: line-break"><BR style="mso-special-character: line-break"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体,Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt">治国先齐家 <SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></B></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体,Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体,Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">【原文】 </SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">所谓治国必先齐其家者，其家不可教而能教人者无之。故君子不出家而成教于国：孝者，所以事君也；悌<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">(1)</SPAN>者，所以事长也；慈<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">(2)</SPAN>者，所以使众也。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">《康诰》曰：“如保赤子。”<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">(3)</SPAN>心诚求之，虽不中<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">(4)</SPAN>，不远矣。未有学养于而后嫁者也！</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">一家仁，一国兴仁；一家让，一国兴让；一人贪戾，一国作乱。其机<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">(5)</SPAN>如此。此谓一言偾事，一人定国。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">尧舜<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">(7)</SPAN>帅（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">8</SPAN>）天下以仁，而民从之；桀纣<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">(9)</SPAN>帅天下以暴，而民从之。其所令反其所好，而民不从。是故君子有诸<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">(10)</SPAN>己而后求诸人，无诸己而后非诸人。所藏乎身不恕<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">(11)</SPAN>，而能喻<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">(12)</SPAN>诸人者，未之有也。故治国在齐其家。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">《诗》云：“桃之夭夭，其叶蓁蓁。之子于归，宜其家人。”<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">(13)</SPAN>宜其家人，而后可以教国人。《诗》云：“宜兄宜弟”<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">(14)</SPAN>宜兄宜弟，而后可以教国人。《诗》云：“其仪不忒，正是四国。”<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">(15)</SPAN>其为父子兄弟足法，而后民法之也。此谓治国在齐其家。（传<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">9</SPAN>）</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">【注释】 </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">1</SPAN>）悌（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">ti</SPAN>）：指弟弟应该绝对服从哥哥。②慈：指父母爱子女。③如保赤子：《尚书·周书·康诰》原文作“若保赤子。”这是周成王告诫康 叔的话，意思是保护平民百姓如母亲养护婴孩一样。赤子，婴孩。（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">4</SPAN>）中（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">zhong</SPAN>），达到目标。⑤机：本指弩箭上的发动机关，引申指关键。③偾（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">fen</SPAN>）：败，坏，。尧舜：传说中父系氏族社会后期部落联盟的两位 领袖，即尧帝和舜帝，历来被认为是圣君的代表。（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">8</SPAN>）帅：同“率”，率领，统帅。③桀（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">jie</SPAN>）：夏代最<?xml:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" /><st1:PersonName ProductID="后一位" w:st="on">后一位</st1:PersonName>君主。纣：即殷纣王，商代最<st1:PersonName ProductID="后一位" w:st="on">后一位</st1:PersonName>君 主。二人历来被认为是<st1:PersonName ProductID="暴" w:st="on">暴</st1:PersonName>君的代表。（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">10</SPAN>）诸：”之于”的合音。（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">11</SPAN>）恕：即恕道。孔子说：“己所不欲，勿施于人。”意思是说，自己不想做的，也不要让别人去做，这种推己及人，将心比己的品德就是儒学所倡导的恕道。（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">12</SPAN>）喻：使别人明白。（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">13</SPAN>）”桃之夭夭……”：引自《诗经·周南；桃夭》。夭夭（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">yao</SPAN>），鲜嫩，美丽。蓁蓁（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">zhen</SPAN>），茂盛的样子。之子，这个（之）女子（子）于归，指女子出嫁。（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">14</SPAN>）“宜兄宜弟”：引自《诗经·小雅·蓼 萧》。（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">15</SPAN>）“其仪不忒……：”引自《诗经·曹风·贰Ｒ牵潜恚侨荨＿╰<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">e</SPAN>），差错。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">【译文】 </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">　　之所以说治理国家必须先管理好自己的家庭和家族，是因为不能管教好家人而能管教好别人的人，是没有的，所以，有修养的人在家里就受到了治理国家方面的教育：对父母的孝顺可以用于侍奉君主；对兄长的恭敬可以用于侍奉官长；对子女的慈爱可以用于统治民众。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　《康浩》说：“如同爱护婴儿一样。”内心真诚地去追求，即使达不到目标，也不会相差太远。要知道，没有先学会了养孩子再去出嫁的人啊！</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　一家仁爱，一国也会兴起仁爱；一家礼让，一国也会兴起礼让；一人贪婪暴戾，一国就会犯上作乱。其联系就是这样紧密，这就叫做：一句话就会坏事，一个人就能安定国家。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　尧舜用仁爱统治天下，老百姓就跟随着仁爱；桀纣用凶暴统治天下，老百姓就跟随着凶暴。统治者的命令与自己的实际做法相反，老百姓是不会服从的。所以，品德高尚的，总是自己先做到。然后才要求别人做到；自己先不这样做，然后才要求别人不这样做。不采取这种推己及人的恕道而想让别人按自己的意思去做，那是不可能的。所以，要治理国家必须先管理好自己的家庭和家族。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　《诗经》说：“桃花鲜美，树叶茂密，这个姑娘出嫁了、让全家人都和睦。”让全家人都和睦，然后才能够让一国的人都和睦。《诗经》说：“兄弟和睦。”兄弟和睦了，然后才能够让一国的人都和睦。《诗经》说：“容貌举止庄重严肃，成为四方国家的表率。”只有当一个人无论是作为父亲、儿子，还是兄长、弟弟时都值得人效法时，老百姓才会去效法他。这就是要治理国家必须先管理好家庭和家族的道理。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">【读解】 </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">　　国家，国家，仅从语词关系来看，国和家的关系就是如此血肉相连，密不可分；尤其是在以家族为中心的宗法制社会时代，家是一个小小的王国，家长就是它的国王；国是一个大大的家，国王就是它的家长。因此，无论是国王还是家（族）长都有生杀予夺的至高权力；因此，有君君、臣臣、父父、子子的规范贯穿国与家；也正因为如此，我们才能理解，“治国必先齐其家”。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　不过，进入现代社会，情况已发生了极大变化：一方面，国已不允许实行家长制，另一方面，家已大大地民主化。”不仅君君、臣臣、父父、子子的规范已成为过去，就是孝、悌观念也日渐式微，丧失了“君子不出家而成教于国”的基本条件。而且，“其家不可教而能救人者”的现象也不是“无之”，而是不难见到了，比如说，一个优秀教师教不好自己的子女，一些当政官员的公子以身试法等等。这类事情屡见不鲜，很是令人深思。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">　　从另一方面来看，《大学》的这一章反复强调以身作则，要求“君子有诸己而后求诸人，无诸己而后非诸人”，指出“其所令反 其所好，而民不从”，“所藏乎身不恕，而能喻诸人者，未之有也。… 这些思想却并不因为社会时代的变迁而失去光彩。它既是对“欲治其国者”的告诫，值得推荐给当政为官的人作为座右铭；也是对儒学“恕道”原则的阐发，可广泛应用于生活的各个方面，作为我们立身处世，待人接物的有益参照。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><BR></SPAN><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">平天下先治国<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></B></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体,Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体,Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">【原文】</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #000000">所谓平天下在治其国者，上老老（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">1</SPAN>）而民兴孝；上长长（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">2</SPAN>）而民兴弟；上恤孤（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">3</SPAN>）而民不倍（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">4</SPAN>）。是以君子有絜矩之道也（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">5</SPAN>）。 </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000; mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">所恶于上毋以使下；所恶于下毋以事上；所恶于前毋以先后；所恶于后毋以从前；所恶于右毋以交于左；所恶于左毋以交于右。此之谓絜矩之道。 </SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #000000">　　《诗》云：“<st1:PersonName ProductID="乐只" w:st="on">乐只</st1:PersonName>君子，民之父母（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">6</SPAN>）。”民之所好好之；民之所恶恶之。此之谓民之父母。《诗》云：“节彼南山，维石岩岩。赫赫师尹，民具尔瞻。”（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">7</SPAN>）有国者不可以不慎。辟，则为天下僇矣（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">8</SPAN>）。《诗》云：“殷之未丧师，克配上帝。仪监于殷，峻命不易（<SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000">9</SPAN>）。”道得众则得国，失众则失国。 </SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #000000"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: